This is so over-compressed... it would be good but you're trying way too hard to get it loud. Please for the love of god leave some dynamic range in your music

Pretty mismatched, but each individual section is pretty decent. Also, I weirdly feel like I've heard the bassline around 0:45 before lol

sounds really dissonant and out of key, not sure if that's what you're going for, but either way the mixing is decent